Okay Elena you're definitely on the right track here… The idea is to get it nice and close and fill the frame with small objects which you have done. As always they main issue is light to and composition and for the most part you've done a good job with this. Starting from the top, the the blue flower is nicely centered and a strong focal point The light area in the lower left corner it does pull your eye away from that focal point. Positioning your body just a little bit lower and to point the camera up so as to avoid that bright spot would help.
In the second shot the bulb is out of focus. It's important that focal point and focus and light all come together.
Number three kind of works... a little edge vignetting along the top would help bring our eye back towards the center.
The fourth one down is lovely in terms of composition focal point and light. I love how close you are. In terms of editing I would darken the whole thing a little bit more.
The fifth one has a bit of magic. Although the focus is behind the main red flower, I do like the way the light is coming in and how sharp those needles are.
Okay on the next one, number six, I prefer to see intentional framing when you take the picture rather than cropping whenever possible… This one is cropped very much on the left and right making a very tall narrow picture.
And the last one is just fine except for that very bright spot in the middle left side of the picture Photoshop can deal with that through cloning techniques.
Okay Elena you're definitely on the right track here… The idea is to get it nice and close and fill the frame with small objects which you have done. As always they main issue is light to and composition and for the most part you've done a good job with this. Starting from the top, the the blue flower is nicely centered and a strong focal point The light area in the lower left corner it does pull your eye away from that focal point. Positioning your body just a little bit lower and to point the camera up so as to avoid that bright spot would help.
ReplyDeleteIn the second shot the bulb is out of focus. It's important that focal point and focus and light all come together.
Number three kind of works... a little edge vignetting along the top would help bring our eye back towards the center.
The fourth one down is lovely in terms of composition focal point and light. I love how close you are. In terms of editing I would darken the whole thing a little bit more.
The fifth one has a bit of magic. Although the focus is behind the main red flower, I do like the way the light is coming in and how sharp those needles are.
Okay on the next one, number six, I prefer to see intentional framing when you take the picture rather than cropping whenever possible… This one is cropped very much on the left and right making a very tall narrow picture.
And the last one is just fine except for that very bright spot in the middle left side of the picture Photoshop can deal with that through cloning techniques.