Okay... better... still a couple of comments... Starting at the bottom, the sand is still showing a green color cast... you can fix that by adding magenta. The next one up is my favorite of the group... I love the light on the water and then way the jetty with the silhouettes of the people bisect that light. The next up is very low resolution... perhaps from zooming in too much with digital, not optical zoom... The top one is nice and close... but the white of the shell has clipped, or "blow out" white areas... Without seeing the original file, I can't say if it was over-exposed of if it became that way through editing. Ideally, we want the highlights and the shadows to have some detail... Keep going!
Okay... better... still a couple of comments... Starting at the bottom, the sand is still showing a green color cast... you can fix that by adding magenta. The next one up is my favorite of the group... I love the light on the water and then way the jetty with the silhouettes of the people bisect that light. The next up is very low resolution... perhaps from zooming in too much with digital, not optical zoom... The top one is nice and close... but the white of the shell has clipped, or "blow out" white areas... Without seeing the original file, I can't say if it was over-exposed of if it became that way through editing. Ideally, we want the highlights and the shadows to have some detail... Keep going!
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